http://slow-silence.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] slow-silence.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] f_ophelia 2009-02-08 12:39 pm (UTC)

в финальной фразе, имхо, очень не хватает эмоции.
например, так:

" А ПОТОМ ЕЁ ЗАРУБИЛИ НА МЯСО, БЛЯДЬ!!!"
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